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Friday, August 3, 2018

Writing in Tumu.


↟The Meerkat's Fruit↟





The Meerkats spied on the delicious fruit and waited for the right moment the Chris the Meerkat Shouted “pounce!!”, Then they pounced and landed gracefully on the fruit tree at that moment the vulture smirked and darted down from the sky and snatched the fruit. The Meerkats were furious they charged at the vulture and jumped into a ladder formation the one by one one of the Meerkats jumped on the heads of the Meerkats. Then he  jumped on last time and landed on the vultures feet. He hugged the fruit with the fruit’s warm fuzzy feeling on his cheek. The other Meerkats pulled onto his legs, “Give us our fruit you ugly bird” the said. Then the vulture dragged them by his feet around Clouds, Mountains and Trees. Finally the Vulture slammed a mountain


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7 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 22, 2018 at 1:39 PM

    I liked the way you put full stop and capital letters
    Did you know in Orana Park there is Meerkats
    Next time you could write about games
    Why did you write about Meerkats?


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    1. AnonymousAugust 30, 2018 at 12:23 PM

      Hello Edzen thank you for telling me what i could maybe do. Maybe you could tell me what game I should talk about, also our teacher told us to right about Meerkats and I might visit Orana park.

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  2. AnonymousAugust 22, 2018 at 1:49 PM

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    1. AnonymousAugust 22, 2018 at 1:51 PM

      srry hit reply Hey Jaden,I love this because his name is CHRIS it's the cutest name for a meerkat!
      Did you know meerkats are one of my fav animals.
      Next time you could… not much its perfect.
      Why did you choose meerkats?

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  3. AnonymousAugust 22, 2018 at 1:53 PM

    Hey Jaden,I love this because his name is CHRIS it's the cutest name for a meerkat!
    Did you know meerkats are one of my fav animals.
    Next time you could… not much its perfect.
    Why did you choose meerkats?

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  4. AnonymousAugust 22, 2018 at 1:55 PM

    I love this because the meerkats name is Chris it’s so cute.
    Did you know meerkats are one of my favorite animals
    Next time you could basically you don’t need to do anything you did great.
    Why did you choose to write about meerkats ?

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    1. AnonymousAugust 31, 2018 at 10:21 AM

      Hello Anika,My favorite animal is Meerkats too. I chose to do Meerkats because our teacher showed us a video about them, It's called "Catch It."

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